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This is the first chapter of my story, Present Day. Present Time. It is the story I have done the most work on and I am curious to see what people think (Even though I have never received any comments...) We follow C as she is dragged unwillingly into a fantastic adventure.
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Yes, I am commenting. Be happy. Lol.
I personally think it's pretty interesting, at times engaging.
I felt like it was a mix of "007" and "The Adjustment Bureau" at times.
Overall, I'd say I want to read a second chapter.
I personally think it's pretty interesting, at times engaging.
I felt like it was a mix of "007" and "The Adjustment Bureau" at times.
Overall, I'd say I want to read a second chapter.